Maybe...and then i blanked out!

Okay was in bed early today...dunno what happened i got up to switch on the light and picked up my pencil to write the following...

Maybe you'll never look into my eyes
and say what i so badly want to hear
Maybe we won't be so close
yet another year after year
Maybe things would change
and we would be more far than near
But...

and then i strangely blanked out!!!
{This was 10 minutes ago}

Can someone try and complete this.. ?

Comments

Occasional Brilliance said…
i wudnt knw hw 2 complete it... im a dud wn t comes 2 poetry... bt i wud suggest u lay low n nt think abt it 2 much cz d mr u chase, d mr it'll elude u... let it come 2 u
August 6, 2007 at 7:50 AM
The 'Mad' Orchid said…
Baby only u n only u can complete..just as Mann said give the time it wnts n it wil b cured n u'l see automatic flow of the apt wrds n just the right feelings to wrap it up 4u n become complete..but one thingz for sure..I can identify vry wel wid u in this part n u knw for wht reasons..dnt U :)
Just wnted to say...:)..>:D<..:-*
August 6, 2007 at 11:33 AM
neers said…
Hey good going...i know what triggered that...but ure mad to ask us to complete it :p

lets hope some "poet" reads this and helps u complete it :)
August 6, 2007 at 12:41 PM
IncorrigibleV said…
@mann
hehe, im not thinkin abt this...yeh chod di...kabhi dobara kuch soojhega toh likh dungi

@cheri
hmmm yeah will see when i can complete this and i knw the reasons :P;)
hugs and kisses to u too dear

@bonnie
the first word that came out was "lol" :P
and u know what triggered that? kamaal hai yaar mujhe toh pata nahi tha
as for some 'poet' readin and helpin me complete... well hope floats :)
love
August 6, 2007 at 6:34 PM
Garima Sekhri said…
tht starts off pretty well...try n complete it naa...it'll trun out well
August 6, 2007 at 11:04 PM
IncorrigibleV said…
@garu
will try sweetie...:)
btw do vote on template testing #2 ure the only one who hasnt voted
August 6, 2007 at 11:32 PM
cm chap said…
Ha ha.. No risk frm my side.. better u complete
August 7, 2007 at 10:09 AM
Sam said…
nah!! vands.. it's your baby.. you have to complete it!! I don't think anyone else can do justice t it!!
August 7, 2007 at 5:33 PM
IncorrigibleV said…
@cm-chap
hehe ... i will try :P

@sam
hmmm phir as and when something comes to mind...i'll post again.:)
August 7, 2007 at 7:20 PM
Unknown said…
very nicely written vands :)...complete it as soon as possible!!! i'd luv to hear it! :D
August 8, 2007 at 7:11 PM
IncorrigibleV said…
@tan
thanks lil sis :)
will try to complete it soon !!
August 8, 2007 at 11:42 PM
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