Here I am again...


30th January 2009 4:35 am
मेरी हँसी मुझे लौटा दो
वापस कर दो मेरी खुशी
आख़िर कब तक मैं
यूँही ज़िन्दगी से रूठी रहूंगी ?
अब खामोशी का क्या है मकसद?
मैं जवाब माँगती हूँ...
कुछ तोह कहो, कड़वा ही सही
दिल मेरा सह लेगा फिर से...

The first hindi post on my blog, funny i didn't know how to use transliteration before :P

PS: More published - Read my science arti here and Durjoy's interview here.

Comments

P said…
i m not gonna say anything....
cuz my hindi sucks...
P said…
oh durjoy datta's got a huge fan following amongst my friends...
Meghna said…
swty..u mite think u can tk the bitter truth..but it dat easy to digest..
sumtimes its better not to have any answer's :)

stay happy n smile..u got perfect white teeth for god's sake!! :D
IncorrigibleV said…
@Jinxed Pixie
hey welcome to my space.
Fan followin? nice I'm sure this he'll wanna hear :)
IncorrigibleV said…
@Megs
haha perfect white teeth and me?? :P
I dunno i feel its always better to have answers, i hate wondering!
Jack said…
Vandita,

Beautiful poem. Hope it is not based on personal experience. I agree that we all have to contribute for our environment to be good.

In my comment to your previous post I had written links to those 3 writers.

Take care
IncorrigibleV said…
@Jack
Somewhere everything i write is somehow related to how i might have felt some time or the other. As for this one I wrote it when I was half asleep :P so can't say much.
Abt the links, u just prolly gave me part of their blog urls, it wasnt a link i cud click on, anyways i read all three - goonj's robbed, neha abt the mangalore pub incident and chiseled abt love bein a convenience after a point. :)
hey!! where did my comment go?? id commented!!! :O

so id said i love hindi poetry, its so amazing, and urs is real nice too...

and im so dying to read oily
Pri said…
nice attempt :)
uve expressed it beautifully...

take care!
cm chap said…
Good you learnt to use transileration..But bad for me, I dunno how to read Hindi
IncorrigibleV said…
@Harini
i dunno :-/
im glad u liked this one ...
and oily is fun, padh le
IncorrigibleV said…
@CM Chap
arre no problem, main english mein likh deti hoon

"Meri hansi mujhe lauta do
Wapas kar do meri khushi
Aakhir kab tak main
yunhi zindagi se roothi rahungi?
Ab khamoshi ka kya hai maksad?
Main jawaab maangti hoon...
Kuch toh kaho, kadwa hi sahi
Dil mera seh lega phir se..."

there... now tell me kaisi lagi?
Ankur said…
तेरे हँसने की आस मे
पूरी जिंदगी निकाल दी
छोटी सी ये जिंदगी
चंद लम्हात मे गुजार दी

pata nahi kaisa hai.. but hindi poem dekhi toh laga ki i shld write one too!! :)
good one.. keep it up and i wud love to more and more such...

but i really wanna know how r u?
Ankur said…
isko dekhkar ek aur
....

वो कहते है की रूठे हुए है हमसे
कुछ बात न फिर वो करेंगे
खता जो की है हमने
वो बता भी न सकेंगे
लगता है उनको की मानो
सजा हम दे रहे है उनको
पर रूठने से उनके
खुद मर रहे है हम तो
कोई जरा बता दे उनको
इन्तेज़ार कर रहे है
IncorrigibleV said…
@Ankur
waah... :)
main hindi mein kam likhti hoon, i know but kya karen... i usually think in english :P
and about how i am, well I'm doin well dear... nuthing special, monotonous life hai!
IncorrigibleV said…
wow... that was super... i wish i cud write such nice hindi :)
Ankur said…
u r damn gud yaar... just give it a try! :)
and its nice to b back here...
Ankur said…
but as i cant stop my thoughts to flow.. i think something is not right!! :)
IncorrigibleV said…
thanks for the complis, pakka kuch try karungi.
what did u mean by the last comment, plz elucidate

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